michael oliver

Rookie - 111 Points (13-4-1948 / swansea)

The Birds Of A Winter Evenings - Poem by michael oliver

The unmoving of the air sings the midwinter sigh
Trees being unheard veils of the summer memory
Their thin rhythm hold the alighted evening notes
A suggested whisper in the dusk sky emptiness

These bird placed improvisations lilting with some aria
In the fabric of the turning seasons slumber
A winter air lullaby a roosted moments harmony
To the wan sun and the year's setting


Comments about The Birds Of A Winter Evenings by michael oliver

  • Rookie - 82 Points Scotty Dogg (1/23/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    Beautiful! Suggested whisper! So many random great ideas here gives the piece it's magic. Loved it Mike. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (1/22/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    You setting a nice panorama for us to enjoy_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013


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