The Better Gems Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury
The Better Gems
What's better than gold?
A heart of gold and a golden rule
Thus donot over the mined thing drool.
What's better than pearls?
Any pearls of wisdom
grant the oyster some freedom
What's better than diamonds?
Supernovas that dazzle like them
So fret not if you cannot
afford the earthly
underground gem
What's better than rubies red?
Carmine roses and rosy lips
I do and maybe you too
already have them
What's better than emerald?
Feline eyes glowing in the dark!
Ah Lord! that fluorescent spark!
What's better than silver?
The hope that every cloud has a silver lining
Even miners they don't enjoy the mining
What's better than amber?
Amber eyes in God's variety of eyeball shades
Ah! those ebony-eyed maidens and maids.
And whether it be
zircon or amethyst
sapphire or lapis lazuli
agate opal or tanzanite
what tis far better
than all these gems put together
is anyone known as a
'gem of a person'
Now it's up to you to go
beyond your flesh and blood
and be a guiding star!
A sweet poem of sensual experience with a Keatsean touch.Fine.
the gems are compared with living and non living things and their characters! Good Try! keep it up!
yes...gem of a person..... but where does one find one....it is an increasingly materialistic and insane world.... wish you good luck.. :) nice poem liked reading cheers
You are so right Zaynub, you absolutely right....these things just for temporary not even give a meaning for a hungry people, compared to the food in difficult time, and yet humanity cannot be paid by all amounts of gems...but the heart of gold is the real gems for eternity, which it display peace as it shine...thanks for reading me, wish you the best_Soul
A gem of a write that is more precious than gold.....wonderfully penned.
'What's better than silver? The hope that every cloud has a silver lining Even miners they don't enjoy the mining' - This is the stanza that I liked most. Nice poem.
the best gem of a person and your so right and maybe a little sparkler for the wedding ring...nice words in the meanings of this gem of a poem...regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/27/2024 2:24:51 AM # 1.0.0
Such beauty shines in this touching work that celebrates the natural wonders of our world. Great stuff