I forgot to express gratitude
For the lovely green garden which I had
As the seeds which I planted were of lack
Though gradually the trees grew big and tall
But did not bear any flower or fruit
The feeling of lack
And the feeling of gratitude
Can not go hand in hand
So had I grumblings
And began to complain
The tress shed their leaves
And I went restless and became pale
But when in despair I gave up
And buried all expectations
Slowly, I saw, the garden returned into green
I thanked a lot in gratitude
In turn trees bore in plenty flowers and fruits.
it is quite natural of the erring, negligent and quite forgetful of all of us that we mostly forget not only to express but even feel any gratitude...though our bookish knowledge is completed by the fact that gratefulness is one of the fountainhead of virtues...the way you have outlined the composition for conveying this msg is effective! ! !
we have so much we all should all be grateful for our blessings/ lovely write
Yet another example that the IT IS appreciates any Soul's true detached gratitude. Thanks for sharing this with us! Cheers!
Comments on your poem ''The beauty of gratitude'' Commented on 12/9/2013 4: 00: 00 AM by Anne Lise Andresen - Oh my.... for a beautiful poem.... thank you Wahab! ! ! - Love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gratitude the food for everything to grow as the poem bears friut...a beauty...regards