The Beast Within Me Poem by Jan Andrei Manzano

The Beast Within Me

Rating: 5.0

Only a few could recognize my anger—
A ferocious beast living within me,
Hidden behind my smiles, smiling;
Its presence is savage and horrifying,
He could bring inferno and ruin spirits;
The beast has always been awake and active,
But I learned to tame and control it;
It is not prisoned or chained,
It is free... and I let it take over me—
If someone insults, disgusts, betrays,
Or takes advantage of my innocence and kindness;
The beast is not physically violent, but
It will punish you with words, with truth, with justice;
The beast will mark afflictions on your chest,
And it will remain until the whole world hears your outcry;
Return what you have taken, and you will be forgiven,
Give me back my smile, my joy, my vibrance,
And you need not to suffer from darkness;
I love this huge and bad creature within me,
It reminds me to always protect myself,
And that no one has the right to hurt—
A joyful, kind, and innocent soul... like mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 04 September 2023

I give The Beast Within Me: five stars *****

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Bri Edwards 04 September 2023

'It is not prisoned or chained' I say: use 'imprisoned'. I especially like 'Return what you have taken, and you will be forgiven, Give me back my smile, my joy, my vibrance, And you need not to suffer from darkness; '

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Bri Edwards 04 September 2023

'He could bring inferno and toast spirits; ' I would type 'an inferno'. By 'toast', do you mean 'make into toast' or 'an act of proposing a drink in honor of or of drinking in honor of someone or something'? ?

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