The Beach Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

The Beach

Rating: 5.0


WATER SPLASHING AGAINST THE ROCKS
PEOPLE WALKING LIKE SHEEP IN FLOCKS
SUN SHINING HIGH
WAVES WANTING TO FLY
WIND BLOWING IN THE NIGHT
THE OCEAN SHINING JUST RIGHT
GIRLS LYING ON THE BEACH
TREE'S WITH FRUIT TO HIGH TO REACH
RED TANNING MARKS
WHITE WAVE SPARKS
THIS YOU CAN CALL A GREAT VACATION
REACHING FROM NATION TO NATION

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

It's beautiful poem, a natural one. I loved it. CP

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Luzaan, You painted a picture with your words and you rhymed it beautifully as well. Thank you for sharing. Karin Anderson

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