I Love You Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

I Love You

Rating: 4.3


YOUR EYES AS BLUE AS THE SKY
YOUR HAIR AS WHITE AS SNOW
YOUR SMILE BRIGHTENS MY DAY
AND YOUR HANDS SO SOFT TOUCHING MY FACE
WORDS LIKE MUSIC TO MY EARS
YOU CAME CLOSER
I CLOSED MY EYES
AND YOUR LIPS TOUCHED MINE
SO SOFT AND PURE
SO WONDERFUL AND EXCITING
YOU SLOWLY PULL AWAY
SMILED AND OPENED YOUR EYES
THEN YOU LOOKED ME DEEPLY IN MY EYES
AND SAID THE WORDS I WANTED TO HEAR


I


LOVE


YOU! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Luzaan You have expressed your feelings beautifully in this poem as they led up to the grand finale, the three words that were so important to you. Just lovely.....Karin Anderson

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Fay Slimm 06 January 2009

Nicely pesented and rhymned, Luzaan - - and tihis reads with a soft undertone with adequate metre....... well done

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angel unknown 06 January 2009

COOL...........................................

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