That Day Poem by bree nada

That Day

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that day was horrible
that day was blue
that day was bad for my health
it was valentines day, what was i to do?

I waited for your call 24/7
i waited for you hug
a gift from the heavens

but that gift never came
and you never showed

my phone never rang
the poor thing hasn't made a sound in weeks
for you, i only sang

now those days are over
valentines day has passed
you don't know how to deal with me
so i guess our love has passed

we're done
we're through
there's nothing left to say
let's not speak of this again
because we're threw

i almost gave in the other day
i almost called you, this is true
because when it rains so hard
i only think of you

but no, i stayed strong and let the rain pass
it cried so hard for me
just as i cried for you

you weren't there when i needed you
you weren't there at all.
just leave my sight,
and never call
because that day is over
you had your chance, but decided to stand tall.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Dead Poet 15 February 2007

Great line where you talk about how the rain cried for you. Very imaginative! Cant wait to read more!

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