Thank You Poem by Juneil Sechico
Thank You
For the grins and thoughts of love;
Made me fly like a liberated dove,
For the words of solicitous act;
Became a shield of my unarmored back.
For the simple way of care;
Became a map of a place called nowhere,
For watering my dry heart;
Helped me made a brand new start.
For the blazin' torch that lights mine;
Made my dark vision clear and fine,
For the reminder of God's eternal love
An oozin' gift from up above.
I'm talkin' much ado,
Makin' this poem pleasing to you,
Like a dolphin in ocean blue,
But I found no words but thank you.
Strong and simple. You use good desciption and choice words. DC
okey, this is beautiful..thankf you is only i can say..very nice..grace
I have re-read this verse Juneil and I like it even more on second reading - there is tenderness and beautiful phrasing - - 'watering my dry heart' very poetically descriptive. Keep writing and more like this please......... from Fay. a 10
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4/27/2024 5:13:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very well done with this one. The suject cosen cannot be bettered. There should br more gratitude in the world. Carry on writing on such endearing lines Juneil. from Fay Slimm.