At The Bench Poem by Juneil Sechico

At The Bench

Rating: 4.9


As I gaze to the boundless sky
Of lovers' starry dream,
From the lulling solitary bench
Under the tranquilizing tree of whim;
Sugar-coated smile sketched
On my rough and wrinkled visage;
Seeing the cottony-soft haze,
Forming my dream girl's angelic face;
Soothing my weary heart and mind,
From a long day of labor for life

Silky Bella Luna says her hi,
With illuminating beauty
Glowing in the infinite sky,
To ev'ry head needing her lit,
To light the foggy road of confusion
Of the lover's oblivious feet.
As her sparky dust descended,
To daydreamer's whim-conceiving head;
My expressive pen can't wait to write,
The fantastic event of whim-packed night.


Fireflies having their scintillating feast,
With pure and unfabricated zest,
Of the tree's standing ovation,
With verdant foliage of celebration,
Merrily swinging with gentle wind,
Of vap'rous sigh of endless heaven.
Allaying lit shining over me,
Garnishes my poor vocabulary,
With paintful words of lexicon;
Gleaming underneath of auric moon.


Winsome supernovae capture my sight,
Blazing with aureate-silver light;
Brilliantly dazzle my heart's eyelet,
As I face to the nightful firmanent.
Celestial beatitude homes,
In the navel of my bosom;
Claiming a permanent residency,
In my heart's enlarged territory;
Making me feel ameliorated,
From my yesterday's incompetence.


The night is calling me to go home,
After my mind had been fairly blown,
By my boundless imagination;
My eyes are craving for cloud-nine bed,
To give a rest my carousel head,
From visiting the notional world;
Urges me to tell what is must be told.
Heaven's nectar of love filled my cup,
Of unmeasurable happiness;
With saccharine joy in ev'ry drop.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

What a beautiful poem...I enjoyed reading it it wont be my last time reading it either lol great write =) keep up ur written -Ash

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Ency Bearis 30 March 2009

wonderful cosmic imagery write..impressive verses...10

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Indira Babbellapati 30 March 2009

richly worded to suit the theme...

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James Mclain 27 March 2009

Thank you for the pleasure of this poem..this should knowing you take the socks off of any girl of dreams to pass your way..thanks again..iip

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Chitra - 27 March 2009

simply spectral in effect, the cascades of imagination puring down from the heavenly alcove of love...sprinkling the euphoric dust...to encircle the mind with the luminscent rays of the auric moon..

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Rommel Mark Marchan 07 April 2009

HI MORE POWER YOUNG POET SURE U WOULD BE BETTER THAN VILLA SOMEDAY TAGA CDO MAN POD KO JAN SA BURGOS TRY TO READ MY ABU SAYAF POEM

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If you garnish this vocabulary any more we will be banished from your world...lol..iip

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Fay Slimm 06 April 2009

The descriptive expressions used here defy the reader to do anything but be taken up to the dreamy heights along with the rich words..... Juneil this breathes romance..... and 10 + + ++ from Fay for the breathtaking ride.

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Juneil Your imagery and vocabulary are excellent! I loved 'carousel head' and nectar of love The last stanza wrapped up a brilliant and beautiful piece of work. Karin Anderson 10 from me

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

Cosmic poetry applied written in a nice imagery....10

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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