Ten Killed Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

Ten Killed

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Ten killed

Rented are most of the vehicles
-that run, jump to pavements
-to kill bunch of walkers, innocents.

What a shame!
-a deep shame!

No more is incident.
No more is limited.

Prompt is the support when happens
-not within the borders, everywhere
-the candles with vigil, donations!

Such actions do deserve:
- "Thank you everyone, is great! "

But still can be shame!
-very deep of a shame!

Since the core
-and the root
-are ignored-
-forgotten! ! !

Great is help given
-for deprived and injured!

What about the reason?
What makes the criminal?
What is wrong and social?
Why so far all are male?
When will join the female?

Will jailing be healing?
Will jailing be healing?
Let's repeat:
Will jailing be healing?
Will jailing be healing?

I, as one, disagree, have my doubt!

Monday, April 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: social comment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 01 May 2018

Nassy, thank you for this memorial poem. You have asked some pretty tough questions. And the answers are desperately needed. I think that caging up human beings can never be healing. When I was a counselor, working with offenders in a CRC (halfway house) , I found that most of them responded very well to this rehabilitative setting. I still believe that this should be the wave of the future. Not human cages!

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Nassy 01 May 2018

Thank you Richard, I was forced behind the bars and saw what they learned when they lost hope to be seen as equal or even human. I worked with UNHCR and witnessed the crimes that were coming or committed thanks to losing connections and relations. I agree with you, in full.

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Carl Roussell 01 May 2018

A good write, and thought provoking.

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Nassy Fesharaki 01 May 2018

Thanks Carl...grateful.

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