Tanka-V Poem by Shreej k.c

Tanka-V



well trimmed bouquets of
tulips and lilies picked
fondly from garden
sulk at emptied wedding hall
reminiscing fickle fame

Monday, May 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fame
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 10 May 2016

the 'pivotal effect' is ok, here - shifting from the 1st image/mood ('upper poem') , to the 2nd.. ('lower poem')

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Shreej K.c 10 May 2016

Thank you ☺

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