Fact, Fancy And Fate. Poem by Shreej k.c

Fact, Fancy And Fate.

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To give up is light, its easy
Keeping up rends you apart, its dizzy
Its worthless chasing a bubble
Bliss is to stay remote from trouble
Damn! call me genius or a dope
Its a pain clinging to flicker hope

How splendid the castle in air
Its alluring, magnificent and fair
Pleasure is even, who cares its a dream
Lets just deny to pass this concrete brim
Why to bother, learn the ropes
Its a sore living with hopes

But the poll is how long? ?

How long can we smile at the pie in the sky
the reverie, the trance, how long they take to dry?
What's the span before realism pry
coercing us to trace the ray and begin to try?
I dread we espy the hope and its too late
to discern the verge tween Fact, Fancy and Fate.

Saturday, March 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry written with deep of insight in poetic diction. One can only realize dreams that are visualized not ones that are figments of imagination. A beautiful poem well articulated, nicely encapsulated with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Shreej K.c 22 March 2015

Hey Thnks! its a huge encouragement for someone who rarely writes.

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