Tanka -Sparrows Poem by Eddie Roa

Tanka -Sparrows

Rating: 2.8


Sparrows walk the line
on a treeless sun-drenched lane
dodges stone thrown
Boys scurried from the scene
Away from Mom's shouted threats

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 13 October 2009

Don't treat poor defenseless birds that way, just watch them and see the beauty of God and your good mother would be happy. Cheers!

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Wow this is nice Krista

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Nimal Dunuhinga 22 February 2009

Your sparrows bring a bright summer and fresh feelings Eddie!

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Angelica Dela Cruz 20 February 2009

sounds like a summer poem.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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