But, I Wanted To Sing – Poem by Eddie Roa

very nice lines enjoyed them.

This terse poem was well written and expressed, Eddie. In fact, it remined me of a famous opera tenor who cancelled an appearance in Philadelphia a few years ago because he had an upset stomach and an inflamed esophagus. Stomach and gastro-intestinal disorders can often be debilitating, despite the many over-the-counter remedies for them. Though your words painted an uncomfortable picture in this poem, it was a good one! Carl.

Another refreshing write form you Eddie different and a pleasure to read, Lynda xx 10

A very informative write I could just picture it, although I would have never thought about it. A good write. LOL I enjoyed it Thamks

its nice to relieve that dyschezia...and able to sing..

A smile and a bow to your poetic endow...

Nice poetic flow 6 beats in every line

sir I really enjoyed this poem, a very original and interesting piece of work...10

Excellent Ed. I love the twist.

I digested it well but it was short. Anyway, t'was great, it helps my brain to exercise today.I need it.