Tanka-Iii Poem by Shreej k.c

Tanka-Iii



oxford cap flies high
vibrant hood pats on the back
ironed gown cringes
shy to take certificate
from his father's old cracked hands

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: graduation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrapping up the self declared weekend haiku/senyru/tanka day with this self-assessed tanka!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

:) a good tanka (even if I prefer the other one.. you know which one) - the note is funny, too ;)

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Shreej K.c 08 May 2016

'tanka' seems good- it doesn't discriminate between human and nature per se: -p but then 'classical haiku is difficult to catch and that's why the charm! Thank you for nice comments ☺

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