Tanka - Camelia, Charles Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Tanka - Camelia, Charles

Rating: 2.8


Camelia, Charles
behind their smiles
Diana's tears
the marriage that
became too crowded

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 29 March 2005

I agree with Kenny Boy. Well done.

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kenneth william snow 29 March 2005

excellent John...you exhibit great talent in so few words. Kenneth

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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