Surprise Poem by Luwi Habte

Everyone commits mistakes but very few have the courage to correct it. Wish you will be in those few. Nice write.

great write..the theme is a bit of twitch and glitch of presentation in poetic craftmanship..well done..

I like the chosen rymes you use in this poem. Its easy to remember especially for high school students presentation.! 0+++. Please if you have time, can I ask favor too? read my poem and do honest rating and comments to make me feel at ease and become like you soon. thanks much

you style is unique....i found it interresting to read you poem...good job and keep writing.

A unique style, a profound theme and a lovely poem. We start our relations with mutual fear but if we approach them with a positive frame of mind they turn heavely. So is friendship. CP

Very often we have wrong perceptions about people and we tend to become unnecessarily suspicious of human nature.But some incidents created by the Almighty help us do away with these feelings.The poem is a very good reflection of how we transform our beliefs about an individual towards better.Briefly expressed but excellent. To me friend is someone who may not join you at your good times, but will extend a rock-solid support during your bad times, who may not speak a single good word in front of you but always tell good things behind your back, who will maintain hundred percent confidentialityity with you for the shared secrets for ever and above all who will want to continue friendship without any expectations from you. But I am a bit skeptical, at this age, is there any such friend? Or even if he/she is there do we value him/her?

Very nice poem...id love reading it! ! !

from the keen lady of truth...I liked this line a lot... friendship is learning to love a person with all his facets....learning to continue to be friends...is adjusting to differences and seeing the spice of life together.....

ah! what a slanty, sane and soulful view of life.... keep wriitng my child

Love you for your poems my dear poet! ! ! Love you for your truth & innocense in thought! ! ! Go ahead....