Sunrise Poem by Pankti Vadalia

Sunrise

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The day starts with a sunrise
Waking up fresh minds and eyes.
Cool breeze, calm and soothing;
Chirping birds, butterflies dancing..

The buds open after a sweet sleep;
Bats going to bed seeing the sunbeam.
The shining sun, giving light and heat,
Providing the environment a protective sheath.

Dew drops on the leaves
Like the pearls of the seas..
And so starts a routine day,
With refreshment and no delay.

This sunrise gives us a hope:
What's dark is going to glow.
We just need some patience
To enjoy nature's ambience..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dev Anand 31 August 2017

Cool breeze, calm and soothing; Chirping birds, butterflies dancing.. buds, freshness of nature... perfume. sunlight. all the wonders of nature your mind has captured well. thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 March 2016

The buds open after a sweet sleep; Bats going to bed seeing the sunbeam. The shining sun, giving light and heat, Providing the environment a protective sheath. Wonderful nature description and powerful observation of nature. thank you very much for this poem- You are so young and you can write like this. i do wonder. God bless you. tony

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2014

Well tried Pankti and as you are pankti then panlti can compose a nice kavita th poem well tried to rhyme you have killed the body kept the soul it can be even better thank you beta

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