Strong Union Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strong Union

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I shall need you at each turn
To burn
My ill desires
As I want to prove no liar

You have chosen me as partner
That too as close member
I shall prove true
And pass through

I know I am not worth
An shall cause no worry henceforth
I shall always sand by
And honestly try

I know how to stay
And never go away
From the scene
And always be seen

We have strong union
And you as best companion
I shall be lucky
And pray always to almighty

Thursday, November 13, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

I shall need you at each turn To burn My ill desires As I want to prove no liar

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 November 2014

welcome Ade Caparas Manilah, Tista Chatterjee and Charu Jain like thi Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

nice Sai Krishna2 hours ago nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

Well composed. We need partner in life....! Devendra Bajgai1 hour ago The message is great but the need to correct the spelling and syntactical lapses..! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

Not bad Billy Loving1 hour ago Good effort - the last stanza could use some work- a little raw

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Heather Wilkins 13 November 2014

we have strong union and you as best companion I shall be lucky and pray always to almighty a lovely write about marriage

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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