Streets Of My Mind Poem by Dean Loughin

Streets Of My Mind

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Walking the streets of my mind
skipping the stones
broken by time

Searching for memories
I long to recall
The terrible things
that started it all

Was there a voice?
was I alone?
Where are you now?
...so far from home

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 28 July 2012

Excellent - a story waiting to be told.

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Captain Cur 20 July 2012

Very good start, would like to hear what else is on that street. Plunge down deep. Truth lies in the caverns. Good write.

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