Straight Down Poem by Alone Tone

Straight Down



Moved to the bottom of the sea
staying out of the sun's life.
Head low, missing the trees.
Deep inside breathes a knife,
cutting along the edge of strife.

Infinity of space bleeding outwards
reaching for the reflection core,
but only slashed by heaven's door,
sending me back to nevermore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Foley 08 August 2008

Interesting and thought provoking piece. Would enjoy reading more from you.

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Viola Grey 26 July 2008

this piece is stunning....I await more

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Ency Bearis 25 July 2008

A nice metaphor...keep on writing... Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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