Moving Forward Poem by Alone Tone

Moving Forward

Rating: 5.0


don't look back, stay on this new track
allow the light to be, pardon the darkside you'll see
the window washer came by and cleaned
now when you peer about, all you'll see will newly sprout
slowly the sun will appear, and in your heart love will steer
yes there will be clouds to come, but dont allow it to undo what's done
continue on the track that started to build a tender stack
dont turn around, or you'll see what once was frowned
so smile, feel glee, and give the gift of a calm sea
let the waves crash, than forgive them, for they wont last
they will however, shape the land quite clever
just dont mind them, dont be of them, all will be fine in time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R T 14 October 2008

Simply lovely R T

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Seema Chowdhury 11 October 2008

very nice and soft wordings used in the poem....

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Linda Moore 04 October 2008

You are so right, we must keep our joy, so many things try to take it. We can refuse to let it go.......10 Lovely

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Bernard Ceasar 17 September 2008

...let the waves crash, then forgive them, for they won't last, they will however, shape the land quite clever, just don't mind them, don't be of them, all will be fine in time...wow-I really like this. ****-4 stars.

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