Storm Steps Poem by karen sinclair

Storm Steps

Rating: 5.0


Straggled grass sits amid
Sediment sand
Eerie are the silent steps
Which stand in painful solitude
Reaching for cloudless skies
Raising thoughts heaven bound

To no-where
From somewhere barren
Wasted
Forlorn
By storm of passionate irresistable irrational winds

After a heavy storm
A staircase stands alone
All else is gone.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dealing With Loss...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Scully 02 July 2012

A very emotive poem with some memorable lines. I especially like ' Straggled grass sits amid' it conjures up a myriad of possible senarios which you compose later in the poem. Really nicely written.

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Straggled grass sits amid Sediment sand really enjoyed your first lines and especially 'storm of passionate irresistable irrational winds' such lines always tug at my soul :)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 July 2012

Reminds me of Earlams Beach, Dovercourt. Thanks.

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Valerie Dohren 02 July 2012

The storms experienced in life so often leave us reaching for something beyond - very good write.

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Gabhriel Londe 02 July 2012

Very beautiful, strong imagery. Hits me particularly hard, being a resident of Joplin Missouri (tornado of May 22,2011) so brings back the memories of metaphors I found amist the rubble. Such a profound metaphor for loss. Thanks for sharing!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 July 2012

After a heavy storm A staircase stands alone All else is gone - nice projection

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