~ Stop Opiumed By Opinions Of Others [so4] ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Stop Opiumed By Opinions Of Others [so4] ~

Rating: 4.5


~ Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others [SO4] ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26 July 26,2010

I’m in my own I
Phew whew scrap trash
Mega bytes of biblios audios visuals
Pouring every millisecond
From all comers luring
Strange and uncalled for
And unforced for!

Why be prey to that?
As I wish I’ll be
Sociable but
Why be Socialite? ~ Lol!

Why elude equate in
Plus minuses of calories
Curves crevices pop outs
Vital stat to satiate others’
My oomph appeal by
Lingerie lulu ~ sucks up ~ lololuuud?

Socialites personages
Of Page Three
Party animals nocturnals
Stay boozed binged in
Satiating their un-fillable bulimia
For libido lucre gloss glitter!

I’m no petite Page Three
But nonpareil Page A~One
I’m happy with e’er full
Innate richness of my
Ace alto audio of abode ~
Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others.

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Glossary with humility I’m giving what I tried to express:
Alto ~ The pitch range of the lowest female voice

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gregory Pierre-jerome 29 July 2010

this is an interesting write carries a lot of melody in fact...great

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Chulsoo Kim 02 August 2010

getting visa from others to get together makes a person up for sharing the domain of cutting fruit imagination and down for aparting not to serve on their good and better feelings. Fruit can be born after flower falls down.

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Carol Gall 03 August 2010

niv you are one amazing poet

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Marieta Maglas 04 August 2010

wonderful poem, Niv...your ideas are very well expressed here

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Very Bold Poetry …confidence spilling straight phewing to Page Three …as all salivate for to be copy cat of celebs… ‘I’m no petite Page Three But nonpareil Page A~One I’m happy with e’er full Innate richness of my Ace alto audio of abode ~ Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others.’ ~ These lines explicitly speak of futility of being Page Three …to be in Page A~one…opposite of in vogue…full of grit… 10+++

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Bachha Chakravorty 18 April 2012

Bubbling effervescent sparkling self confidence I agree with Gloss Glitter very aptly commented The salivating call of Glossy Life....indeed to shun...Poet clearly showed the happiness in '...But nonpareil Page A~One...' Thanks for sharing Ten+

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Flamboyant and Undaunted Self Confidence...very nicely crafted Poet Ms. Nivedita is much conscious of gender- bias and she accordingly spoke... Women's lib doesn't mean 'want it and have it by any and all menace' as happens in High Society...better to be down to earth with one's own identity Thanks for sharing 10++

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Flamboyant and Undaunted Self Confidence...very nicely crafted Poet Ms. Nivedita is much conscious of gender- bias and she accordingly spoke... Women's lib doesn't mean 'want it and have it by any and all menace' as happens in High Society...better to be down to earth with one's own identity Thanks for sharing 10++

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Amitabha Bagchi 12 April 2012

Simply amazing... 'glossy-life' many salivate for...here poet clearly turned down the calorie to zero....indeed...party animals are lookin' for stale overused cliched life...only to aggravate one's orgy alas its never satisfied...dooms into bloom thanks for sharing 10++

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Amitabha Bagchi 12 April 2012

Simply amazing... 'glossy-life'...many salivate for...here poet clearly turned down the calorie to zero....indeed...party animals are lookin' for stale overused cliched life...only to aggravate one's orgy alas its never satisfied...dooms into gloom thanks for sharing 10++

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