~ Spurned Love ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Emotion is abyssal. Love [both jocund and jilted] Eden is Abyss. Symbolically Poet used abyss to reside and enjoy joy of jilt in niched arena of mind. Indeed best asylum for Spurned Lovers. WR

Fine expression of within. The objective way the hurt caused is expressed informs about the maturity attained by the poetess. Liked the verse much.

Passionate love makes jilt and ‘dys-passion’ [painful passion] magnanimous and gorgeous. Nice expression of jilt. dr.sakti.

True contentment may come from separation than union. It is finest poetry painted in that concept. Love matures best in culture media of jilt. Refreshing and ten AB London.

nice expressions writte here

Who can deny love of any one, not even god. spurned love is more gleaming.

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me. These words are almost musical, they just dance off your tongue as you read them and just reinforces the who poem. So imaginative and so to the point. Great write and which I had you talent for words.

I understand it was hot love, now you favour something softer.(thank you for your lovely comments)

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me. sweet terms and the stanza is sweet and meaningful..some philosophical touches are there..well done

Solid sun rays Hurt me. Liquid dusk Drops. yes soldid sun rays hurt as the love hurts.. but it is blissful too. some thig may hhappend good to you.. nice feeling...10 i loved it and its feeling