~ Why Hack My She ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Why Hack My She ~

Rating: 4.6


Why hack my mind?
I can be bare and nude.

Why do hush-hush eye scallop?
My chaste boobs
I can strip off veil for revel
Egressing 'no-bra-look'.

Why scope scoop tangently lips?
Lend red from beguiling xx blood
To satiate you lip hunger.


Why itch psychically in
Nibble nimble thighs and triangle
in between?
Dive dip deep in horripilant
River Ganga Yamuna
I can lay bedecking billow bed.

Stop hacking
Stop itching
Stop scooping
Stop scoping.

Hey come
Bare nude
Together for sure
Flush all impure
Into unmarred pure
Make us’ your n’ your.
.
Why then hack my She?
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xx ->female

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 09 December 2009

Like telling him 'be gentle to me as you touch'. A sensual poem beautifully written.

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Sranisha Francis 28 September 2015

Stop hacking Stop itching Stop scooping Stop scoping. good writings.

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Anita Trivedi 23 July 2010

I liked the inner stroke of your poem. Great....... Take care

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Kamal N. Baruah 02 July 2012

: -O Its beyond d limit-ly great... I m goin to become ur fan now....

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Pretty Nutty .. 04 April 2012

WOOW! ! , , , So good... loved it..

2 1 Reply
Rajendran muthiah 27 April 2020

The poet goes deep into unexplored regions of mystery. Ganga and Yamuna bedecks the bed. Excellent

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 16 September 2017

I agree to Kelsey Hartmann.Strong wordings to suit the theme.

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Nilima Deb 09 July 2016

A brilliant write! Bold and strong in thoughts...loved too much.

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Octavius Johnson 24 May 2016

This is a deep showing of your disgust at being taken advantge of. If we have you, why exploit you. This is great but I ask you to let me know if my inerpretation is even close

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Prateep Sengupta 16 December 2015

The protest is bold but somewhere it reminded me of Taslima Nasreen's use of bare words sometimes bordering round obscenity or vulgarity. Literature, or more specifically, poetry should imply more leaving it upon the reader to conjure the meaning. Same ideas could have been expressed using more subtle words.

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