Stillness Poem by David Wood

Stillness

Rating: 5.0


Venus's cloudy image
Filled the room with
Breath taking stillness.

Even the beams shouted
In their silence of
The gulf that existed.

Our love pregnantly
Profound, cold as any
Iceberg.

Embers of the day
Captivating the cold
Stillness of life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 July 2013

Stillness haikus coherently delivered. Beautiful. Thank you.

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Patti Masterman 14 July 2013

Very original and memorable verse here.

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Hans Vr 14 July 2013

Very deep and original poem. Can feel the heartbeat in the poem Excellent

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Hazel Durham 14 July 2013

Beautiful echoes of moments in the cold stillness of life! !

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Gajanan Mishra 14 July 2013

O David, My dear poet, I love it. Really you are great creator, I wish you all goodness.

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