Steep Poem by M.J. Lemon

Steep

Rating: 4.9


The price to be paid
For brewing the perfect tea
On a mountain peak

Sunday, September 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: grook,insight,life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

In a mountain peak! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

3 1 Reply
Richard Wlodarski 28 April 2022

And that tea, of course, is Twinings Earl Grey! A very clever and witty haiku, M.J. Love it!

1 0 Reply
M.J. Lemon 01 July 2022

Absolutely, Richard. That tea is nothing but the finest.

0 0
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 April 2021

Perfect tea on a mountain peak. Brilliant stroke dear Mark. Top stars for the Steep

1 0 Reply
Leeann Azzopardi 25 January 2020

Even though I am not a tea drinker I love this Haiku Mark, read some of my new poems

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 27 January 2020

Thanks, LeeAnn. I'm now having some tea...off to your page.

0 0
Valsa George 05 October 2019

To achieve the hard and difficult, we have to really sweat out! What sharpness of presentation and what profound brevity! You are a master of this form Mj.....

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 07 October 2019

So much appreciated. Thank you, Valsa.

0 0
Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2018

Being Inspired by Steep a poem of M.J. Lemon. Difficult was the way to the top of the steep mountain, As I could not climb, I became a knave, And I dived in the hot streams of a fountain, I left myself on the mercy of waves, My mother kissed my forehead and sang, My son will be a cause of another big bang.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 12 May 2018

That is amazing, Akhtar. Thanks so much.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success