Staying Alive Now Poem by Fay Slimm

Staying Alive Now

Rating: 5.0


Bare now, bodies brown and skin-thin,
Limbs outspread, shaking in the cold,
Arms flung awry, trees sigh within,
And nakedly stand, looking old.

Yet, branching out towards relief
Sense spring afar as poised they wait
Bearing rough times, in the belief
That trees, in retreat stand fated
To re-leaf again. They store sweet
Rewards in roots, to impregnate
Dormant buds, daily, if needed.
Such revival trees contemplate.

Unclad they live, but still they thrive.
As a tree so are we, both claim
To hold on, and, by staying alive
Both will survive to blossom again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 01 December 2009

This is poetry at its best.Wonderful words

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Carl Harris 30 November 2009

This is a most beautifully expressed poem, Fay, subtly comparing trees with we human beings. Your fine words were so expressive in this most delightful write and revealed a very astute observation on your part as one the truly great poets on this site. Carl.

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intricately designed... like the trees was this poem.

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Daniel Kempson 29 November 2009

Lovely Fay really enjoyed this, your nature poetry at its best 10

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Carol Gall 29 November 2009

excellent comparison well written 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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