sorrow can leave you spending in a frame
with so much gulit and pain
sorrow was taken as a game
but it's so much more than and emotion
it's a pain
love brings sorrow in the game
it's like a pain calling your name
sometimes that come and never goes away
sorrow is based on a fear
sorrow is a secret you hold near
sorrow can hurt based on if it's a fear
but thats basically why sorrow found you here
I love this poem! I think you did an awesome job describing sorrow :)
This is awesome poem. I think you did a good job on this poem and remind me of sorrow.
Good job i loved it but watch out around the first line you write and not an. Silly mistake: S haha but it was a great poem and if you would like you could read mine. My poet name is everlasting nightmare...but please keep writing you area amazing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is good, ..i love it..keep it up and i kp up reading