Soothing Breeze Poem by Queeny Gona

Soothing Breeze

Rating: 5.0


A day out that I was enjoying
During the long ride
With my beloved friend

Flipping the rain drops
Closer to heart
To share the warmth and love
As if they are dual pearls of my lub-dubs!

Allowing myself to fully drench
In his love
Feeling the dew drops of rain
Rolling down my cheeks
As that flips on rose petals!

Enjoying this cool breeze
Propelling my head out of window
Until the bus horned
Only to awoke from my solitude
Ah! It’s just a dream again
Very soothing in times of pain!

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 08 February 2018

Flipping raindrops and drenched in love.. capturing the sweetest moments of life in your beautiful poem

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Valsa George 08 May 2017

During a long travel when caressed by the soothing breeze, we are likely to fall into a semi sleep. Then dreams come to tickle us....! It is a pleasant experience..! This poem has given me a nice feel!

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Bharati Nayak 06 October 2015

A lovely poem with smooth flow of words.When we find it hard in reality, we may get solace in our dreams.

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