Sonnet 56: A Life In The Pub Poem by David Wood

Sonnet 56: A Life In The Pub

Rating: 4.8


Low misty cloud swirls damp close to the ground
Ancient parlour pubs lined the terraced street,
Slurred speech from beer costing only a pound
And smoke from cigarettes hangs around their feet;
Drinkers in rough clothing prop up dark bars.
And those who indulge in this ludicrous sport
Live in abodes in streets with modest cars,
Reflect silently in a glass of port.
But from whom are these drinkers trying to hide
Before staggering home to a nagging wife.
In their poverty they only have their pride,
Thus sums up their story of a sad life.
These dark lives lived in pubs spread far and wide
Are but chapters lived that life cannot hide.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Based on an earlier poem Life in the Pub. I thought it would look better as a sonnet.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 13 May 2013

Great sonnet David - well written. Expresses pub life brilliantly.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 May 2013

nice sonnet...Dark lives-drinkers trying to hide wonderful

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Paul Brookes 14 May 2013

I feel I'm there with such a good word painting. Life in the pub so well drawn. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Lyn Paul 14 May 2013

A great picture David, I can't breathe because of the smoke. Well done

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Joan Smith 14 May 2013

A true reflection of life in the pub years ago

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Philo Yan 17 May 2013

A real truth, though a sad one. The choices one makes in their lives are always important.

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Kevin Halls 17 May 2013

As someone who has spent far too much time in pubs I can relate to this splendid poem. Spot on though as it can be a waste of a decent life but it is something that is part of the British way of life.A good insight!

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Dave Walker 16 May 2013

A great poem, the pubs are just not what they used to be.

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R.j. Wynn 15 May 2013

That's a thought provoking poem. love it.

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Adeline Foster 14 May 2013

A subject that few would attempt, you did. Try mine - Idle Folly - Adeline

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