Sometimes Poem by Sarah Persson

Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I live inside my mind,
Sometimes I step outside,
Sometimes my thoughts are vivid and deep,
Sometimes they don't exist,
They sleep.

Sometimes I speak but just to myself,
Sometimes I tell those I love,
Sometimes my words are unclear, quite confused,
Sometimes they're harsh,
Anger infused.

Sometimes it's easier to be on my own,
Sometimes I wish for a friend,
Sometimes I hope to find love and romance,
Sometimes it's barely,
A slow dance.

Sometimes I need to have something to give,
Sometimes I want for myself,
Sometimes I wonder just where I belong,
Sometimes I'm home,
But day's long.

Sometimes the words just fill up a page,
Sometimes I can't write a thing,
Sometimes I wrestle between hopes and bad dreams,
Sometimes I just like to sit,
It seems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Qiniso Mogale 27 August 2017

Sometimes. A well written poem on emotions.

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Sarah Persson 27 August 2017

Thank you Qiniso, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)

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Aqua Flower 23 September 2018

An introspective write about life and the emotions. Nicely executed, Sarah!

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

All this happens sometimes but the poem is a beauty for all times.

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Edmund Strolis 02 September 2017

I am most intrigued by the recognition of the many aspects of the mind. Anger, love, solitude, reaching out. One mind with a thousand perspectives. What is true for one may be of no concern to others. What happens when a passion for more meets the reality of being. Like the old saying goes about life. Sometimes the bear eats us and sometimes we eat the bear.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2017

Dual perception of mind is beautifully presented in this poem. This happens like you to all. We walk inside mind and then sometimes we walk outside also. We live onside, inside and outside. We perceive life from different corners. Thoughts are vivid and deep. Sometimes we wish for a friend. Sometimes life is easier and sometimes difficult. We have hope and dreams. But in reality we love God and his creation. Beautifully penned poem is excellently presented here...10

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Bill Cantrell 27 August 2017

Sometimes it is between our wrestling between our hopes and dreams that we have our ups and downs..back and forth, but it seems you always can write! A wonderful poem in which many have walked these footsteps

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2017

You are very right. This is definitely wonderful poem shared here.

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Sarah Persson 27 August 2017

Thank you Bill for your compliment.

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