Casual Replies Poem by Sarah Persson
Casual Replies
All I see is distance,
With no spaces inbetween,
A rock without a resting place,
A deadly fall without the scream.
No light within the darkened sky,
No echo when I call,
Stranded, lost, in sinking sand,
No rainbow after rain fall.
A love lost, both with broken hearts,
No justice in the lies,
No comfort from the truth I know,
All questions hung with casual replies.
A beautifully crafted meaningful poem penned with intense emotions. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
everything yeah everything is there but in distance nothing and none comes but everything hung with casual replies.......///
True love is not born out of lies. Only when you lose love because you got the truth you did not get anything because the suspicion replaced the void. You play beautiful letters. I worship your poetess.
Thank you Jankovic for your generous comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.
The poem is replete with poignant thoughts and feelings, and evokes such feelings in the readers' minds too, particularly those who are not unfamiliar with the pains of lost love and broken hearts. Well done, dear poetess!
First of all, heartiest congratulations on this beautiful poem being selected as the Member Poem Of the Day! I've liked your poem so much that immediately after having read it, I sat to translate it into my native language, Bangla. If you are interested to have a look at the translation, you may contact me at khairulahsan@yahoo.com
No comfort from the truth I know yes most of the times the Truth is bitter. congratulations for POD.
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5/2/2024 6:40:49 PM # 1.0.0.1119
sarah, i'm impressed by this poem, impressed enough to want to read more by you. the flow, the skillful rhyming, the experience you convey—good stuff. -glen kappy
Thank you Glen, much appreciated