Solok Air Batu Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Solok Air Batu

Rating: 4.4


Kampong so loved
A gift from above
Solok Air Batu
An open Igloo
The night is chilling
The day so breezing
When the sun rises
The village blesses
We would not leave
In you we believe
The place to roam
We call home

Wednesday, October 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: house
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about my beautiful hometown in Malaysia.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 October 2016

My early childhood was spent here in Solok Air Batu, Masjid Tanah, Melaka, Malaysia, despite of having born in Singapore. It's a very beautiful farmers' village.

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Saadat Tahir 15 October 2016

a little more help with translation from the poet would be helpful.... a charming poem with nostalgia writ large...a celebration what we always remember the granny's hut.. lovely liked

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 19 October 2016

So beautiful, one could feel the immense love for one's hometown, full of nationalistic pride. You have a talent for writing, keep it up....rated 10++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 October 2016

What a nice poem! .. There's no place like home...... Good work, Sulaiman.....

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Hans Vr 19 October 2016

I love and recognize the feelings expressed in this very well written poem. I fell in love with my own Kampung in Malaysia almost as soon as i moved here

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 December 2022

CONGRATULATIONS being on the list of Best Poems by Member Poets. Number 86. Felicitations

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 December 2022

A Beautiful poem that touches deep in my heart inside. I applaude you, since this poem is simple but very heartwarming, heart touching and a loveliest Ode to your hometown. Very fascinating to read.5 Stars Top Score and myriad more, dear poet!

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A lovely ode to a great place, a nice niche place where any would love to live for eternity.

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A creative and compelling composition that is nostalgic and nice!

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Sara Militello 23 October 2016

How great to write such a nice poem about your hometown. I feel very good about my hometown; the people I personally know and the atmosphere so long as there are no politicians anywhere within sight or sound. It's the politicians of every nation who create the problems and the animosities humanity experiences between them. I would love to exchange ideas about how you approach writing a poem; like do you place the end words first and write into them, keeping your theme in mind? (I have done that) Your rhyming is very good. I enjoyed your poem; its theme and the way you wrote it, too.

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