Solitude Poem by Little Red Apple

Solitude

Rating: 5.0


Some letters I hate

Only hurt I get from these

Leaving you alone

Is it really what you want from me?

To let you be free a while

Understandable then if I ask

Don't you ever notice I just want you to be beside me?

End in the days with smile on our face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

so nicely written.. Its a great poem..

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 November 2008

sometimes we need to be alone, darling. I feel in loneliness we can see brighter, hear louder, sense more expressive, and touch warmer. sometimes we need to listen to nature, flora, and fauna, not only human and its unending problems, right? keep writing! we have to listen to Liszt Bénédiction de Dieu dans la solitude, when we read this small but precious poem! not only love, mostly we meditatively remember God.

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Fiona Davidson 30 November 2008

Lonely sad piece this but very well written...thanks for sharing it...Fi

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Indira Renganathan 29 November 2008

Short and sweet poem..10

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premji premji 25 November 2008

SO LONE YOU ARE LIKE THE LITTLE MORN-STAR 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 23 November 2008

a short poem talking sweet love...nicely composed...give you ten, LMS

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