Sunset From The Moving Train Poem by Little Red Apple

Sunset From The Moving Train

Rating: 5.0


When I see the sunset from this moving train
Which decorated by the pretty fine rain
I remember you as my sun brighten my day
With your shiny smile shining my way

When you have to set at your ease
I'll accept it with a will
Though I may see you just a lil'
Tomorrow, the day after, and the following you will be the same

You will give me that smile
Your unpretentious smile
Needn't to be asked
No need to begged

Seeing that sunset from this moving train
Makes me to forget the suffer of the pain
Even though you will replaced by the moon
I'll see you again enough soon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Trombley 29 January 2009

wow this is a wonderful poem, probably one of my favorites, great write

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Fiona Davidson 30 January 2009

Beautiful images you have here...thank you..

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Joseph Poewhit 30 January 2009

Something about trains, stations and romance? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Kesav Easwaran 14 April 2009

a dawn dear to heart is always there after every sunset...bright words filled with hopes expectations and love...good write, Little...10

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very sweet, the imagery was very good you can just picture the scenario of the train moving away from the sun, to remind of the bright essence of a friendship and the memories shared, very nice

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

This is love that ends with a big bang! ! !

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premji premji 31 January 2009

these lines are painfully dear to me.........

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 31 January 2009

lovely visualisations...a painting wit words

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