So Sweet Poem by Mary Gilliam

So Sweet



When she makes good grades people say, 'I wish I was as smart as her'
When she helps a random friend they say, 'she's so sweet'
When she works out they say, 'she's so strong'
(stupid, mean, weak)

Teachers love her 'she works so hard'
Friends trust her 'I can tell her anything'
Parents rely on her 'she's so loyal'
(Lazy, liar, unreliable)

She looks so pretty
She's such a good person
She is so comfortable with herself
(Ugly, selfish, self hating)

But what does it matter what she feels, she just wants you to be happy
(She needs help)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
People don't realize that even the 'perfect' people aren't perfect.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldrich Suarez 30 April 2013

Nobody is perfect :) but those who done good works done it perfect.........and yet others never realize them because they base it on their own deeds :)

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