Gert Strydom

Freshman - 1,129 Points (03 April 1964 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

So lovely on that morn (Balassi stanza)


So lovely on that morn
when our kisses were born,
beauty had joy forever
and somehow we did change,
but it did not feel strange,
I wish it to be never
much different from this
a fragile kind of kiss,
the flower wilts however.

Submitted: Monday, May 05, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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  • Rookie - 0 Points Colleen Courtney (5/5/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    A nice piece. Wouldn't it be great if the newness and excitement of a beginning relationship could last forever? I really the beautiful way this piece is worded. (Report) Reply

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