Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 264 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Snow & Red - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

The French soldier put the gun behind his head. What a miss…
While the German soldier was sitting on his knee in the snows
French soldier said: now you will pay for killing my wife
She was my everything and my life….
Bang….
The blood wrapped….
German felled
French soldier opened the fist of German…
Then he saw a picture….behind it was written: I love you my sis…..
Yeah, the picture of his wife……


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Rhythm main scheme: A

the tragic poem series.
hope you like them I

Comments about Snow & Red by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/19/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    interesting...i like any kind of tragedy poems!
    thanx
    (u draw a sad picture with words...) (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (9/18/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    Tragic and sad....dont cry i told my eyes..when he fallen...he returned to love, broken love..where hearts finally failed to understand..in this world_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013


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