Snow & Red Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Snow & Red

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The French soldier put the gun behind his head. What a miss…
While the German soldier was sitting on his knee in the snows
French soldier said: now you will pay for killing my wife
She was my everything and my life….
Bang….
The blood wrapped….
German felled
French soldier opened the fist of German…
Then he saw a picture….behind it was written: I love you my sis…..
Yeah, the picture of his wife……

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 18 October 2015

Great write, sad and tragic a very interesting write!

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Alookh (matin) 19 September 2013

interesting...i like any kind of tragedy poems! thanx (u draw a sad picture with words...)

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Unwritten Soul 18 September 2013

Tragic and sad....dont cry i told my eyes..when he fallen...he returned to love, broken love..where hearts finally failed to understand..in this world_Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

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