Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 453 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Snow & Red - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

The French soldier put the gun behind his head. What a miss…
While the German soldier was sitting on his knee in the snows
French soldier said: now you will pay for killing my wife
She was my everything and my life….
The blood wrapped….
German felled
French soldier opened the fist of German…
Then he saw a picture….behind it was written: I love you my sis…..
Yeah, the picture of his wife……

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Rhythm main scheme: A

the tragic poem series.
hope you like them I

Comments about Snow & Red by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (10/18/2015 11:32:00 AM)

    Great write, sad and tragic a very interesting write! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/19/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    interesting...i like any kind of tragedy poems!
    (u draw a sad picture with words...) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (9/18/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    Tragic and sad....dont cry i told my eyes..when he fallen...he returned to love, broken love..where hearts finally failed to understand..in this world_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

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