Simple Yet Intricate Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Simple Yet Intricate

Rating: 4.8


Nodoubt you gave us brain, a gift sovereign
To unveil the mysteries behind our each gain.
It enables us to reach upto definite decisions
Regarding our constitution and origin even.

An intricate computer is the human mind
Cybernetics the computer science has so proved
Yet unlike the computers why it bears emotions
Why oh God on it we can not find a solution.

Of the modern science is it victory or defeat?
Which is no doubt for human mind a credit.
It is able to synthesize the mechanical men
Though devoid of any life or any emotions.

We find thus hopelessly your gift has limitations
And after a certain point we have to gulp dejection.
We have to realize with moan our incompleteness
Any cue for completion is beyond our guess.

Oh God why did you left us perfectly imperfect
In each sphere inclyding our varied emotions.
You made the human mind simple yet intricate
Was it thy fear for safely from his perfection.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

Oh God why did you left us perfectly imperfect In each sphere inclyding our varied emotions. You made the human mind simple yet intricate Was it thy fear for safely from his perfection...... touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem incisively delineated. Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 March 2016

Victory or defeat! Nice work.

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Valsa George 02 February 2016

Though man has many accomplishments, he has very many limitations too. God didn't create us perfect. As Browning believes, 'on Earth the broken arcs, in Heaven the perfect rounds'! We have to accept this. Striving for perfection is a vain attempt! A Great write that asserts this irrefutable truth !

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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