Sickle Moon! Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Sickle Moon!

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My sickle moon! How nice I find you sail
This ocean sky! You dive and hide with ease
Into the frothing cloudy waves, unveil
To rise up bathing high! You look a piece
Of cheese.To where you fly? You please explain.
This night is mute and hence you don't deny.
You touch my heart, I wish you know my pain!
You say you have no time? I wish you bye!

This sky is dark devoid of stars just like
My heart that finds no lighted lamp. Come back
With waxing peace to soothe my ailing psyche
Hopes incandescent you bring, gleam the dark
Edge of my gloomy heart and add delight
I wait, resign into this musky night

12 Feb 2019

Tuesday, February 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 17 March 2020

The shining moon in the sky is always a delightful sight to both young and old. The moon in the shape of a sickle and the full moon.... both fascinate us. In a cloud laden sky, when there are no stars, the moon draws our entire attention. The very sight of the illumining disk in the sky, lessens our afflictions and gives us joy! A beautiful poem on the Moon!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 February 2020

A poignant yet beautiful poem with great images. It captures loneliness so vividly.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 February 2020

So true Rose Marie. Poignancy has given birth to most well written dramatic monologues. Liked your observation on my poem piece. Thanks a lot

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2020

" I wish you know my pain! " Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2020

A Sonnet. Not your cup of tea. I understand your pain! Thanks for your witty feedback. Enjoyable

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