Shreds Of Emotion. Poem by Fay Slimm

Shreds Of Emotion.

Rating: 4.7


Love only needs love,
............................... but nothing less.
Mere shreds of pale
..................strained emotion remain
When love is neglected
.................. and becomes stressed.
Then passion usurps
.................love's place and it drains.

Best of feelings can
........................... no longer blossom.
Lust used as substitute
................................. covers no pain.
Hurt asserts itself
.............................. and hurt is costly.
To compensate, hearts
........................ just need love again.

Emotions work best
.........................to demonstrate love.
Shredded, they only prevent
...............................love's movement.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Kempson 22 October 2009

Avery deep and poignant write Fay 10 Daniel

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

fabulous poem...poignant and heartfelt!

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Stacey Watts 22 October 2009

Very nicely written. The words flow beautifully. It was very heartfelt.

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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

Appreciated your really wise and knowing words about love.

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Runita Menezes 28 October 2009

Nothing replaces love.......Love is above everything. Absolutely wonderful..10 + from me.

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Georgia Girl 22 October 2009

This is so true Fay and so beautifully written...10 +++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 22 October 2009

a poem which flows like love...beautiful...10

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Sandra Martyres 22 October 2009

A poignant but beautiful write Fay....10

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