Short Poem - Pain Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem - Pain

Rating: 4.8


The body suffers pain and
torture in hope to attain
the solace of achievement
which allures like a mirage.

Tuesday, February 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 02 February 2016

We are willing to endure for what we find pure

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Souren Mondal 03 February 2016

All our lives we must endure pain to attain happiness - NO PAIN NO GAIN as they say.. Thank you Asim.

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Valsa George 04 February 2016

Often achievement is as elusive as a mirage..... but still we are ready to endure any amount of pain for it! A Meaningful quatrain!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 February 2016

Achievement is awesome as a flower that needs water to rise. The beauty requires good work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 February 2016

Achievement is amazing as a flower that needs water to rise. The beauty requires good work.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

A work which anyone will envy short and meaningful.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2016

Yes! Like a mirage. Great work! !

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Abhilasha Bhatt 07 February 2016

Body suffers from the pain caused by wounds of body and heart suffers from the pain caused by wounds of soul.....beautifully written.....thank you for sharing :)

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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

That's so true. In life our every attempt is to gain a sense of achievement n for this purpose we can endure physical n spiritual pains. Good work.

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T Rajan Evol 05 February 2016

Superb....The body suffers pain and torture in hope to attain the solace of achievement which allures like a mirage.

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