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(February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

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Feelings of loneliness
In a land unknown
Familiar faces in an unfamiliar sea
Oh! Heart mine, don’t go pieces
Embrace the new land
With people beloved
I know you can
Go then
Live there
A climb down in morning
Climb up in evening
My new house in the foots of hill.

Submitted: Thursday, May 02, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013


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  • Kanav Justa (5/18/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    when you hove got hills as your companion, , theres nothing to feel lonely about, , , , ,
    enjpyed reading it, , ,

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  • Karen Sinclair (5/15/2013 11:11:00 AM)

    this is well written. although you start off sounding unsure of your new surroundings, your final description sounds like somewhere most on the planet would like to live...i wasnt sure which poem you wanted me to review so i picked this one purely by the title..which i loved...plz feel free to have a butchers (look) at any of mine... tyvm karen

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