So many years of hardship
So many nights of lost sleep
So many days of heart-thief
So many tears of love's grief
I don't know if it will come to an end
Since she has proved she is no more my friend!
Now she is like a snake with two faces
So she can bite me from both the places
Whether I am near or far away!
Alas! She can make me go astray!
this is a very unique poem in all iuts aspects i just simply love it good job and keep writing, love, Tin Mouse
Pararhyme hardship/sleep interesting. Lines eight and nine strained, almost funny which I don't believe was your intention probably rhyming faces with places.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Keep writing..... Simple easy to understand