Senryu- Unfulfilled Dreams Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Unfulfilled Dreams

Rating: 4.2


deep below the clouds
hangs like some silken wishes
far from dreamy eyes

Thursday, January 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 02 March 2018

Stunning imagery! A poetic delight!

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2018

A beautiful senryu, thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 15 January 2018

Beautiful picture you exhibit, a clear thoughts in this imagery and words that painted it here was really amazing! provoking....our dreams are always unseen by many but once it be real, then only it be like rain, felt by everybody!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2018

Far from dreamy eyes! But, hope still lies ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 04 January 2018

Nice poem full of mysticism. It relates to a man's spiritual probe. Thanks for sharing, Asim ji.

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