Senryu Tasting Nectar (Syllable Count 5-7-5) Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Tasting Nectar (Syllable Count 5-7-5)

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Colorful butterflies
tastes the nectar petals sigh
from their gentle touch
























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Friday, September 13, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 14 September 2013

very fine image with inner meanings.

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

Hello Helen beautifully written i am always envious of you talented people who can master the art of Senryu and Haiku well done

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 September 2013

profound a lovely deep 5-7-5 i felt a butterfly for a moment thank Heather nice so beautiful 10

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