Senryu 14 (Blue Eyes) Poem by Savita Tyagi
Senryu 14 (Blue Eyes)
Two blue eyes of yours
Set in a void, waiting for
Rainbow to emerge.
Senryu 14 (Inspired by Blackhole pictures)
two black eyes of yours
mysterious black holes
universe sinks there.
two black eyes of yours mysterious black holes universe sinks there.........well constructed with lofty theme. Thanks for sharing.
A wonderful short work dear madam! I find a great poetic depth behind the screen of this beautiful poem.....10
Of late, we don't have the boon of watching a rainbow in the sky! May be because of climate change! However may the blue eyes set in the void have the fortune of beholding a rainbow! Beautiful Senryu!
Oh as usual as an old man I was confused. You see, I had forgotten about that poem on black hole. But after some fumbling got on to one. This one too is quite creative.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Some are waiting for Messiah, some for Krishna and some for Mehdi; they all may be right but there is rainbow inside us and it has seven beautiful colors, let us expand t to all those who are waiting for the Heavens to to replace the ugliness into beauty. A nice poem by Savita Ji.