Senryu 14 (Inspired By Black Hole Pictures) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 14 (Inspired By Black Hole Pictures)

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two black eyes of yours
mysterious black holes
universe sinks there.

Tuesday, April 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by recent black hole pictures.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 27 April 2020

Yes two eyes are the black holes in that the whole life may sink. A nice short poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 July 2019

Lovely expression. If eyes reflect your feelings, they also hide as much, the reflection is no total reveal, so are black holes, but nothing comes out of them. What about light eyes?

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